faras-palt

>> miva e velnar

rens / kelk: mosii (serfan akuno)
estel: kozet

"ketta, re komis sa non!"

yumel o yumel, ka kalte flon o flon,	#Your translation: ka zok e daizkad fanzel o fuo kolm ses sol neeme t'imelnia
rsiilator daizkad verx o fanzel		#"daizkad" should be an object of "kolm"("rsiil" would be better). "fuo" is colloquial.
sol neeme lant oken imelnia		#I added "lant" in order to make up for the number of syllables.