By Ian Dunn
Speech Recognition Software
Erik Owen and Kevin Feutz
Seems a little bit broad. Is the paper a survey? I might mention that in the title.
This is probably a stylstic opinion on my part, but I wouldn't start an abstract with "This presentation discusses...". It's implicit in the abstract that you are giving an overview of the presentation, you needn't explicitly state it :)
I'm a big fan of this breakdown. Looks good to me.
Looks good, lots of sources that appear relevant.