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Home Page | |
Today’s tech, tomorrow’s mindset, yesterday’s problems. => Todays tech, tomorrows mindset, yesterdays problems. | |
(no apostrophes) | |
You ideate, validate and prototype. => You bring the ideas, | |
Unsure exactly what you're saying here | |
on fluffy clouds | |
??? in the cloud? | |
Company | |
Our Story | |
client we were lucky to have the chance to work with. => clients we were fortunate to have the opportunity to work with. | |
(plural) | |
"fortunate" is better than "lucky" | |
And "opportunity" would be better than "chance" | |
What We Do | |
We help successfull businesses to initiate, escalate their game and launch business they created with great effort. => We help successful businesses to initiate, escalate their game and launch business they created to great effort. | |
Spelling of successful; __to__ great effort | |
How We Do => How We Do It | |
We extend our expertise for long-lasting infrastructural development => We use our expertise for long-lasting infrastructural development | |
"use" rather than "extend" | |
make sure it stable => make sure it is stable | |
Missing verb | |
Services | |
ABOUT SERVICE => ABOUT THE SERVICE or ABOUT OUR SERVICE | |
Back-End Development | |
Your business deserves to be handled nothing less than perfect. => Your business deserves to be handled nothing less than perfectly. | |
Perfectly rather than Perfect | |
Front-End Development | |
Either it is the product or the business itself => Whether it is the product or the business itself | |
DevOps | |
services that operate seamlessly at high velocity. => services that operate seamlessly at high speed. | |
speed would probably be better than velocity | |
Extended Team | |
different organizations varies from conglomerates to start-ups. => different organizations from conglomerates to start-ups. | |
Drop the word varies, or use "ranging from" | |
Over the years, we worked as remote workers, freelancers, in-housers and contractors. => Over the years, we have worked as remote workers, freelancers, in-housers and contractors. | |
"have worked" rather than simply "worked" | |
Managed Products | |
Moneo is here to make it up-and-running flawlessly => Moneo is here to get it up-and-running flawlessly | |
"get" rather than "make" | |
Technologies | |
The product or the business; either of the shines at first sight. | |
"these", perhaps rather than "the"; but unclear of the meaning of this | |
Software Craftmanship with Style | |
one reliable, clean and updateable clean code. => one reliable, and maintainable clean codebase. | |
Repetition of "clean" |
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