Problem | Example (before) | Example (after) | Justification |
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Unnecessary use of "the" | "The rapid growth of the software size" | "The rapid growth of software size" | Definite article "the" is not needed before "software" |
Removed "a" in front of "hardware" | "... on top of a dedicated hardware" | "... on top of dedicated hardware" | Hardware is an uncountable noun (such as "gold"). So you may not use indefinite articles "a/an" with it. |
Replaced comma use with semicolon | "A timing ... tool, therefore, must be ... and uncertainties, otherwise, it ... becomes useless in practice" | "A timing ... tool, therefore, must be ... and uncertainties; otherwise, it ... becomes useless in practice" | Used a semicolon to separate independent clauses (complete ideas) for better readability instead of comma |
Introduced "the" and "a" when needed | "Finding periodicity of signal ..." | "Finding the periodicity of a signal ..." | Required addition of definite and indefinite articles |
Simplified phrasing | "Provides insightful discussion ..." | "Provides insight ..." | Opinion |
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