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Attention-Getting Words and Phrases For Hot-Selling Copy
Attention-Getting Words and
Phrases For Hot-Selling Copy
The right words help you express the function of your product or service
with flair. They add color and drama to your presentation to make it more
interesting. Try to use words that evoke emotions and vivid mental pictures. Let
your prospect enjoy a little fantasizing about what his or her life could be like.
Employ selected words solely for their shock value. Stop readers in their
tracks. You demand attention by using words and phrases not normally associated
with your type of business, product, service, or your chosen communications
vehicle.
Add an original twist. Do something that’s slightly off-kilter. Out of the
ordinary words, phrases, questions and combinations are naturally interruptive,
capturing the attention and arousing the curiosity of the scanning prospect.
Avoid worn-out, generic descriptions and all clichés. Common expressions
that have been used over and over again lack the important headline requirement of
stop-ability.
Find words that characterize what you’re offering in a descriptive and
appealing way.
Incorporate unusual or descriptive company or product names into your
headline. Be aware that most typical names probably aren’t good candidates for this
technique. It takes a special name to make this work. A unique or catchy name
linked by association to a powerful benefit can have far-reaching positive
implications.
Consider using quick-phrasing combinations that communicate
instantaneously, without the need to read each individual word in order to
comprehend the meaning. Instant recognition phrases include such combinations
as: free report, 24-hour service, lose weight, etc. The sooner you can transfer your
message to the mind of the over-stimulated, time-poor prospect—the better.
Add pizzazz by linking your benefit to a well-known name. Using a name
that prospects can relate to, increases readership due to its’ instant recognition.
Possible names include famous people, cities, buildings, tourist attractions,
companies or well-known products.
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Use words that have attention-getting capability because they aren’t often
used for promotional purposes. Commonly used terms simply blend in, producing
less than desirable results.
Select a small group of words that resonate with your audience. Choose
your words wisely. You only have a few short seconds to capture attention and
interest. You have only one shot at winning an audience. Develop your most
powerful and most concise sales message.
Employ strong action words that involves prospects and activates their
interest.
Capture and record attention-getting words culled from other sources such
as radio ads, billboards, magazines, etc. Jot them down and later transfer these to a
file folder or computer file that you can use as a reference the next time you need to
come up with a great headline. Try to string together several of these words into a
powerful headline. This gives you another formula for creating effective headlines.
Proven Effective Headline Words
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Mouth-Watering
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Successful
Hot
Daring
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Make
People
Money
Results
Sale
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Look
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Action Words
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Make
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Strong
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Surprise
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Security
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Startling
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Better
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Challenge
Profits
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Selected
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Discount
Reduced
Lowest
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Special
Wanted
Power
Who
Want
Why
Which
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Attractive
Famous
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People
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Profusely
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Colorful
Approved
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Words To Avoid
In your headlines, you’ll want to be certain that each word contributes to the
collective power of the headline. Keep it up-beat and positive. It’s okay to remind
readers of their pain, but, always follow it up with a powerful, positive solution that
promises to alleviate their pain and replace it with pleasure.
Keep an eye out for words that have negative connotations. Eliminate dull,
uninspiring words that fail to grab prospects attention. Your task is to keep
prospects interested and enthused and this can only be done with words that evoke
positive feelings.
Always review your headline for words that lack power. Carefully
scrutinize your words and edit out any word that fails to: A) contribute meaning,
or… B) help hold the sentence together. Avoid common modifiers like “very” or
“extremely”. You’ll also want to be sure that your headline is unique and that
means not using the same words that your competition uses. Take a good look at
each and every word. That’s how masterful headlines are created.
Following is a short list of words you might want to avoid using in your
headlines because of the images associated with them. There’s no absolute rule
against using these, but if you do, be sure that you don’t cast a mood that’s too
negative or gloomy.
Death
Destruction
Dead
Poor
Fail
Sell
Hard
Wrong
Negative
Disaster
Difficult
Deal
Pain
Liability
Bad
Failure
Obligation
Decide
Cost
Loss
Contract
Worry
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