- Keep the message as short as necessary but no shorter.
- Put the most important information at the top of the message.
- If it email is for an ask, call out from who you need the response and put it at the top of the message.
- If you need to send a long email with many details, put the most important information at the top (ie. what the reader needs to know) and then fill in the body with details he/she can choose to indulge.
Example:
Hey Jane, I need your input on how to prioritize my current work. Can you provide guidance on where I should focus? Bug XYZ was assigned to me and it's taking longer to complete because we have a dependency on Vendor ABC completing a change to their web service. This is impacting the commitment to my team on Feature 123 because we are near the end of our sprint.
Lemme know.