edits.txt

thanks for translating this :)

I found the following errors (I didn't look through everything, I just re-played through the start section):

In Map001.json
- line 7390: 
"getting drawn gets embarrass..." but should be
"getting drawn gets embarrassed..."

- line 7390: 
"But why would the artist be embarrass!" should be 
"But why would the artist be embarrassed!" (you might want to do "!?" as well, up to you )  

- line 7452: 
"Geez, You always worry over the" should probably have the Y not capitalized ("you"), unless there was some reason for it ()
"Geez, you always worry over the"

- line 10063/10070:
"The wire loop through the side window, there's" "no use trying to remove it.", but I would prefer 
"There's no use trying to remove the wire lock on the side window." or something similar. Again, up to you.

- line 3003: 
"There is a water tank" should probably be 
"There's an aquarium".

- line 3010: 
"The water plants sway refreshingly." should probably be 
"The aquatic plants sway refreshingly."

- line 17537: 
"There is a net between the gap of the shelves." should be 
"There is a net in the gap between the shelves"

- line 13456: 
"The letters are tightly jam together." should be 
"The letters are tightly jammed together." (I would prefer a different phrasing but I can't think of one myself :S)

- line 52215:
"Here is a sellotape." should be
"Here is a tape dispenser" or "Here is a sellotape dispenser"

- line 11317:
"the leafs." should be
"the leaves." - I think leaves is the most popular spelling of the plural of "leaf"

- line 52780:
"This room sure have a lot of newspaper." should be
"This room sure has a lot of newspaper."

- line 52918:
"Well newspaper are pretty sturdy, you know." should be
"Well newspaper is pretty sturdy, you know."

- line 52960/52968:
"Like... if you put newspaper into a bundle," "and then \\C[2]tape it\\C[0] into a good shape..." should be
"Like... if you bundle up the newspaper," "and then \\C[2]tape it\\C[0] into a good shape..."

in Skills.josn
- line 61:
"message1":" protect himself.", should be
"message1":" protects himself.",

I understand you might not be able to make some of these changes due to the text box limit.