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Refactoring with simple rules
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class Foo | |
def something(bar) | |
bar.do_something | |
end | |
end | |
class Account | |
def initialize | |
@balance = "0" | |
end | |
def deposit(amount) | |
amount.times { @balance.succ! } | |
end | |
def balance | |
@balance.to_i | |
end | |
end | |
def downcased_email(username, domain) | |
[username, domain].map(&:downcase).join "@" | |
end | |
def copy_lines_matching(infilename, outfilename, regex) | |
lines = File.readlines(File.expand_path(infilename)).select {|l| regex.match l } | |
File.open(File.expand_path(outfilename), 'w') do |file| | |
lines.each {|l| file << l } | |
end | |
end |
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class Foo | |
def something(bar) | |
# send a message to a passed in object. Impossible to know whether it has any side effects! | |
bar.do_something | |
end | |
end | |
class Account | |
def initialize | |
@balance = "0" | |
end | |
def deposit(amount) | |
# send a message to an internal state-changing object | |
# admittedly you would not typically see this kind of an implementation, but I wanted to | |
# illustrate an example of state-changing methods on instance variables | |
amount.times { @balance.succ! } | |
end | |
# compute and return a value, easy! | |
def balance | |
@balance.to_i | |
end | |
end | |
# compute and return a value | |
def downcased_email(username, domain) | |
[username, domain].map(&:downcase).join "@" | |
end | |
# write out to a file | |
# other possible outcomes could be error messages if the file doesn't exist, or the | |
# user doesn't have permission to read or write | |
def copy_lines_matching(infilename, outfilename, regex) | |
lines = File.readlines(File.expand_path(infilename)).select {|l| regex.match l } | |
File.open(File.expand_path(outfilename), 'w') do |file| | |
lines.each {|l| file << l } | |
end | |
end |
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# I have not included the User class that powers these examples. Can you implement a | |
# User class to work with the MyClass#top_users method? | |
# we start with this... | |
class MyClass | |
def top_users(users) | |
users.select {|u| u.registered? && u.registered_before(3.days.ago) }. | |
reject {|u| u.role == "admin" }. | |
sort_by {|u| %w(email website twitter).index u.referral_stream }. | |
first(5) | |
end | |
end | |
# and extract a couple simple local variables...getting rid of "magic constants" | |
class MyClass | |
def top_users(users) | |
admin_role = "admin" | |
referral_streams = %w(email website twitter) | |
at_most_users = 5 | |
registration_threshold = 3.days.ago | |
users.select {|u| u.registered? && u.registered_before(registration_threshold) }. | |
reject {|u| u.role == admin_role }. | |
sort_by {|u| referral_streams.index u.referral_stream }. | |
first(at_most_users) | |
end | |
end | |
# now we can do the same with that big functional-style chain | |
class MyClass | |
def top_users(users) | |
admin_role = "admin" | |
referral_streams = %w(email website twitter) | |
at_most_users = 5 | |
registration_threshold = 3.days.ago | |
registered_users = users.select {|u| u.registered? && u.registered_before(registration_threshold) } | |
non_admins = registered_users.reject {|u| u.role == admin_role } | |
ordered_users = non_admins.sort_by {|u| referral_streams.index u.referral_stream } | |
ordered_users.first(at_most_users) | |
end | |
end | |
# now that we have these local variables, we might choose to extract some of them to methods | |
# I'll start with the simple local variables first | |
class MyClass | |
def top_users(users) | |
registered_users = users.select {|u| u.registered? && u.registered_before(registration_threshold) } | |
non_admins = registered_users.reject {|u| u.role == admin_role } | |
ordered_users = non_admins.sort_by {|u| referral_streams.index u.referral_stream } | |
ordered_users.first(at_most_users) | |
end | |
def registration_threshold | |
3.days.ago | |
end | |
def admin_role | |
"admin" | |
end | |
def referral_streams | |
%w(email website twitter) | |
end | |
def at_most_users | |
5 | |
end | |
end | |
# and now we'll move those other lines into their own methods | |
class MyClass | |
def top_users(users) | |
registered_users = recently_registered users | |
non_admins = all_non_admins registered_users | |
ordered_users = order_by_referral_stream non_admins | |
ordered_users.first(at_most_users) | |
end | |
private | |
def recently_registered(users) | |
users.select {|u| u.registered? && u.registered_before(registration_threshold) } | |
end | |
def all_non_admins(users) | |
users.reject {|u| u.role == admin_role } | |
end | |
def order_by_referral_stream(users) | |
users.sort_by {|u| referral_streams.index u.referral_stream } | |
end | |
def registration_threshold | |
3.days.ago | |
end | |
def admin_role | |
"admin" | |
end | |
def referral_streams | |
%w(email website twitter) | |
end | |
def at_most_users | |
5 | |
end | |
end | |
# Interestingly, our new class is about 4x the size of the original one, but the | |
# #top_users method has stayed the same number of lines | |
# Which is better? It's a matter of opinion... but I prefer a more readable method, | |
# even if that means there are more lines of code due to decomposed helper methods. | |
# We didn't add any logic - we just split out the logic that was there into | |
# well-named boundaries | |
# Now for some fun, we'll do one more extraction - a bonus Extract Class extraction | |
# I notice some subtle duplication here... the idea of passing around a list of | |
# users and filtering based on it. So I'll split those methods up into their own class: | |
class MyClass | |
class UserList < Array | |
def recently_registered(treshold) | |
self.class.new(select {|u| u.registered? && u.registered_before(threshold) }) | |
end | |
def all_non_role(role) | |
self.class.new(reject {|u| u.role == role }) | |
end | |
def order_by_referral_stream(referral_streams) | |
self.class.new(sort_by {|u| referral_streams.index u.referral_stream }) | |
end | |
end | |
def top_users(users) | |
UserList.new(users).recently_registered(registration_threshold). | |
all_non_role(admin_role). | |
order_by_referral_stream(referral_streams). | |
first(at_most_users) | |
end | |
private | |
def registration_treshold | |
3.days.ago | |
end | |
def admin_role | |
"admin" | |
end | |
def referral_streams | |
%w(email website twitter) | |
end | |
def at_most_users | |
5 | |
end | |
end | |
# I also find it interesting that the newly-refactored method is structurally similar | |
# to the original one - it is again a chain of functional-style calls, only this time | |
# we've encapsulated those functional-style calls into methods with intention-revealing | |
# names. This makes it a lot easier to understand what the code is doing, and makes it | |
# easier to change because we only need to locate the one method that needs to change. | |
# With a few small tweaks, this example could be made even more powerful by introducing | |
# polymorphism - can you see how to do it? |
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require 'date' | |
stuff = File.file?('stuff.txt') ? File.readlines('stuff.txt').map(&:chomp) : [] | |
if ARGV[0] == 'a' | |
new_stuff = ARGV[1..-1] | |
new_stuff << Date.today | |
stuff << new_stuff.join(':') | |
elsif ARGV[0] == 'r' | |
split_stuff = stuff.map {|s| s.split(':') } | |
grouped_stuff = split_stuff.group_by {|s| s.last } | |
grouped_stuff.each {|k, v| grouped_stuff[k] = v.group_by {|s| s.first } } | |
sorted_keys = grouped_stuff.keys.sort | |
sorted_keys.each do |key| | |
parsed = Date.parse(ARGV.last) rescue nil | |
next if parsed && parsed != Date.parse(key) | |
puts key | |
group = grouped_stuff[key] | |
if (ARGV[1] != 'e') && (f = group['f']) | |
f.sort_by {|i| %w(b l d).index(f[1]) }.each do |i| | |
puts i[2] | |
end | |
end | |
if (ARGV[1] != 'f') && group['e'] | |
puts '----' | |
group['e'].each {|e| puts e[1] } | |
end | |
puts "====" | |
end | |
end | |
File.open('stuff.txt', 'w') do |file| | |
stuff.each {|s| file << s << "\n" } | |
end |
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