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-AlphaSphere pre-orders open
+AlphaSphere Pre-Orders Open
 
 A musical instrument for now
 
 Bristol and Frankfurt, 21 Mar 2012 - nu desine ltd, the developers of AlphaSphere - the brand new electronic musical instrument, are taking pre-orders on an exclusive limited edition release.
 
-Largely through word-of-mouth, interest in the product has grown, and enquiries have flooded in from around the world.  From the Canary Islands to Japan, from Canada to Israel.
+Largely through word-of-mouth, interest in the product has grown, and enquiries have flooded in from around the world—from the Canary Islands to Japan, from Canada to Israel.
 
-The Bristol based developers have been running user-testing, for musicians, bands, producers and artists in their home city, and musical melting pot of Bristol, U.K.
+The developers have been running user-testing, for musicians, bands, producers and artists in their home city, and musical melting pot of Bristol, U.K.
 
 
-“It’s limitless and it’s going to change the world.  It’s fantastic.”
+“It’s limitless and it’s going to change the world.  It’s fantastic!”
 
 Rob Stewart, from Bristol band ‘The Naturals’
 
 
-The instrument, which moves computer-based music production back to an instrument; through a spherical, tactile interface, can be ordered now from alphasphere.com.
+The instrument, which moves computer-based music production back to physical reality; through a spherical, tactile interface, can be ordered now from alphasphere.com.
 
 Compatible with both MIDI and OSC, and offering Multichannel Polyphonic Aftertouch, the AlphaSphere runs with new software which allows the instrument to be loaded with samples, sequences and connect to existing DAWs.