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Common App & Stanford Essays

The following are my responses to the main Common App essay and the Stanford application questions. You're welcome to read them to try and understand how I got "in" to Stanford, or just for fun. Whatever you choose to try and take away from these essays, I hope you get something out of them. Or nothing at all, that works too. Enjoy.

A Brief Note

There's no secret formula. There are a lot of people more qualified than me that got denied. Even though they may have been more qualified, I beat them when it came to the essays. The most important part of your application is your essays, so I would encourage you to spend a lot of time on them. Spend time reflecting on who you are and how you can use your essays to communicate that. The readers of the over 40,000 Stanford applicants know a fake essay from a mile away. If you want to have a chance at admission, your essays need to be 100% authentic you, not 90% authentic you and 10% your mom/tutor/fake self.

If you plan to apply, I wish you the best of luck. Spend time writing well thought out essays that reflect who you truly are because, I will reiterate, they are the most important part of your application. I didn't have perfect grades/GPA and I got a 31 (preceded by a 29) on the ACT and wasn't involved in any extracurriculars at school besides swimming. I made my essays count and that is honestly what matters most.

Prompt (Common App)

Some students have a background or story that is so central to their identity that they believe their application would be incomplete without it. If this sounds like you, then please share your story. (650 word limit.)

Response

January 9th, 2007 was not your average Tuesday. At 11 a.m. CST, Steve Jobs was scheduled to deliver his highly anticipated MacWorld keynote. Like other Apple fanatics, I anticipated something huge and knew I couldn’t miss watching Jobs unveil Apple’s next genius innovation. Late Monday night, my mom finally relented; she would allow me to skip school the next day. In doing so, she acknowledged something that to this day everyone in my life knows about me. The innovative spirit of Apple has become a profound part of who I am and how I see myself: as an intrepid innovator, a young entrepreneur/business owner, and someone who, from the second I could pick up a mouse, has been obsessed with everything techy.

Cords, gadgets and screens have been my signature since infancy. According to my baby book, my first real word was “hose.” I thought those long green things in people’s yards were outdoor electrical cords. At age six I wanted only one thing from Santa: an overhead projector. “He” found one on eBay. At age eight I purchased (with my own savings) and installed (by myself) a dazzling holiday light display that not only lit up the entire neighborhood but our electrical bill as well. This same year I launched my first successful business: Tony’s Tech Help. Two years later and after saving many months’ earnings, I invested in my first laptop. I was unaware at the time how that purchase would significantly kindle my computer science curiosity.

My new best friend was that new MacBook Pro. I spent hours learning about it while my parents spent hours screaming: “Too much screen time!” At age 11, I was authoring hacky programs and writing bits of code. At age 12, I rented my first server and became fluent in multiple programming languages. In 8th grade, I didn’t just go to school; I spent time each day monitoring my servers and maintaining more than a dozen websites for local businesses and nonprofits. At age 15, I had the idea that would become my next business.

Enter Minecraft, the defining game of my generation. It was Fall 2012 and I started dabbling in coding Minecraft server “plug-ins.” It didn’t take long until buzz about my work grew and I became one of the recognized experts in the global server community. Then came an idea: develop team combat matches organized by server plug-ins on unique Minecraft maps, a concept no one else had yet brought to market. What came next was a prototype, and then growth: from a dozen players on my development server to more than a hundred players on my first 24/7 server. People loved what I had to offer! Just a few months later my infrastructure built on Java, Ruby, MongoDB, and Nginx was exploding with new subscribers and became “The Overcast Network.” By 2013 I was seeing nearly 100,000 unique users and more than 1,000,000 page views per week. I also saw competing servers popping up attempting to mimic my concept. Watching my idea become a wildly successful business was an incredible feeling. In the last 10 months, unique users and page views per week have doubled. I’m also about to present at the international Minecraft convention, Minecon, on the panel “Growing Server Communities.”

While designing the gameplay, website, and overall user experience of Overcast, there is something that not only keeps me inspired, but keeps the frequent feeling of chaos from becoming overwhelming: Apple and Steve Jobs’ legacy. Their everlasting inspiration teaches me time and again about innovation through design, simplicity and the value of risk-taking. As I look to what’s next in both my computer science education and in my life as an entrepreneur, I will, as Jobs’ himself urged in his 2005 commencement address at Stanford University: “Stay hungry, stay foolish.”

Prompt

Stanford students possess an intellectual vitality. Reflect on an idea or experience that has been important to your intellectual development. (250 word limit.)

Response

The most intellectually challenging experience of my life has been applying ideas across multiple fields of study -- from physics, history, statistics and programming; to excellent writing, critical thinking, and persuasion; to applied economics and business ethics -- toward the development of The Overcast Network. My LLC is not based solely on eight self-taught computer languages. It’s an enterprise requiring my whole academic self, including more knowledge and research than I could have ever anticipated.

I’ve also learned a great deal about leadership. Almost out of the blue I was CEO of a startup. The community I never set out to create grew rapidly and suddenly people looked up to me. I had been somewhat of a leader in grade, middle and high school, but this was different. Not only was I at the helm of Overcast, I wasn’t completely sure how to navigate what was ahead, mostly because I didn’t know. Abandoning ship was not an option. Rather, I sought the wisdom of a host of experts: attorneys, established entrepreneurs, business leaders and heads of non-profits. It has been, no doubt, the biggest research project of my life.

One day, 14 months ago, my role as entrepreneur and leader was punctuated when I noticed, on one of my servers, a private message from a user I didn’t know. He disclosed: “You’re my role model.” Like most people, I have role models. Never would I have imagined I could be someone else’s, especially at the age of 17.

Prompt

Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate -- and us -- know you better. (250 word limit.)

Response

Hey roommate:

Can’t wait to meet you! Here are top ten things you should know about me, the guy with whom you’ll soon be sharing a very small space.

  1. Being from Minnesota, you’ll make fun of my accent and my wardrobe. I’ll wear shorts and T-shirts in January; the weather is in California is always warm compared to where I’ve lived for 18 years.

  2. I’ll miss my beloved dog, Fred. Even at 5.5 lbs, he serves up endless love and fun.

  3. Before my morning cereal, little conversation please. After that, I’m super pleasant.

  4. If you have problems with any technology, I can fix them lightening-quick. No charge!

  5. One of my regrets was not discovering study groups until junior year of high school. Once I found new friend groups and awesome study partners in my honors and AP classes, intense study became immensely more manageable (and enjoyable)! I love to invite people over and learn together.

  6. I will play Minecraft.

  7. Fair warning: I will probably make you play Minecraft.

  8. My friends describe me with a single word: “Sass.” I love to laugh, argue, and tease!

  9. I’m not a “suck up,” but really enjoy engaging teachers and getting to know them. I’m never afraid to talk to someone with whom I’m unacquainted.

  10. My parents and sister have already pre-paid multiple weekends at “The Stanford Guest House.” They can’t wait to see me (and escape Minnesota winters, too)!

See you soon!

- Tony

Prompt

What matters to you, and why? (250 word limit.)

Response

Giving back matters. My desire to serve started at a young age. In December 2nd grade, I recall watching our local NBC station conduct their annual Toys for Tots’ campaign, a massive effort inspiring organizations to collect toys for in-need kids. In 4th grade, I decided to act, launching Tony’s Toys for Tots. Soliciting from neighbors, teachers, friends and relatives, the annual tradition began. Each November and December I watched the progressively larger pile of new toys grow in our basement. In winter of 7th grade, my final year of Tony’s Toys for Tots, we needed multiple vehicles to deliver the nearly 300 toys I had single-handedly collected.

Beginning in 9th grade, I shifted my giving to Cristo Rey Jesuit High School Twin Cities, an innovative school situated in urban Minneapolis and serving some of our communities’ most underserved youth. The past four summers I volunteered countless hours helping their technology department provide reliable computing resources to Cristo Rey students. I’m proud to have played a small role in the 100% of Cristo Rey seniors accepted to college or the military.

Most recently, I’ve taken on expansive tech-responsibilities for Prodeo Academy, a just-opened K-8 charter school with a mission of bridging Minnesota’s achievement gap. In partnership with The Lawlor Group, I continue to design, develop, and maintain Prodeo’s web presence, run their email and Google Drive, and provide on-going support.

I’m excited to continue my tradition of service, and to fully engage my new community of Palo Alto.

Prompt

Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences. (150 word limit.)

Response

During the summers before my junior and senior years I not only volunteered a lot, but worked 50-60 hours a week building my business, The Overcast Network. Wanting to be around creative entrepreneurs, I rented space in a hip warehouse downtown St. Paul. I’d get to the office by about 9 a.m. and do programming almost all day, sometimes late into the evening. My friends thought I was crazy; they forced me not to work late on Fridays and keep Saturdays open! They, unlike my parents who have come to appreciate my passion and drive, were simultaneously concerned and intrigued: How could a teenager have so much excitement for a job? What I experienced these past two summers was incredible. I love my job. In an age when most people (especially teenagers) are stressed and/or don’t enjoy their work, it’s exciting to feel exactly the opposite.

Prompt

Name your favorite books, authors, films, and/or musical artists.

Response

OneRepublic, Daniel H. Wilson, The Postal Service, Jonathan Kozol, Cutting for Stone, Scooby-Doo: The Movie, My Neighbor Totoro, and Iron Man 1

Prompt

What newspapers, magazines, and/or websites do you enjoy?

Response

Twitter, Reddit, Engadget, Star Tribune (Minneapolis newspaper), National Geographic, Gizmodo, and Scientific American Mind

Prompt

What is the most significant challenge that society faces today? (50 word limit.)

Response

While war, poverty, and global climate change are among the most troubling issues facing the human race, without full and uncensored access to information we can’t solve, rather we create, social problems. When governments limit freedom of speech, they oppress. In censoring, they suppress the greatest good: an educated citizenry.

Prompt

How did you spend your last two summers? (50 word limit.)

Response

The past two summers I pretty much did four things: Write computer code, volunteer, swim, and relax. Coding and work took the majority of time. However, I intentionally made time for my favorite sport, swimming, serving at a local high school, and hanging out with friends/family.

Prompt

What were your favorite events (e.g., performances, exhibits, sporting events, etc.) this past year? (50 word limit.)

Response

My favorite annual event spans the month of September: iTunes Festival. The event features a vast array of music, the highlight being the one or two artists performing live from London each day. The live stream experience is phenomenal.

Prompt

What historical moment or event do you wish you could have witnessed? (50 word limit.)

Response

Before Steve Jobs passed away, I dreamed of being present to witness the energy and excitement at his infamous keynotes. Whenever I would watch one of the live streams, I felt I belonged there due to the profound influence his innovative spirit has had on me.

Prompt

What five words best describe you?

Response

Tech guru. Apple fanboy. Mathematician.

@aryankeluskar
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I have never met you, but can easily confirm you are going to slay! 🔥

@LuterVVV
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Good afternoon! Sincerity is a rarity these days, so I'm glad it worked out for you. Good luck!

@enes3774
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enes3774 commented Dec 1, 2023

Hi, thanks for that amazing essays. I always wonder why people dont write in an sincere way. I wonder how you wrote your extracurricular activities, did you fill all 10 activities with research and projects? Thanks in advance.

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Thanks for sharing!

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